andi's room

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andi's room

Postby costellopunk » Sun Dec 14, 2003 7:31 pm

andi painted her room
yellow and red
it doesn't sound like it would work
but it does

so we lay there
sharing one of her cloves
looking up at the ceiling
as the smoke plays

dancing in and out of
multi-colored beams of light
coming in through the cracks in the shades
from the christmass decorations outside

we are listening to leonard cohen
trying to figure out if
this makes us lame:

this post coital smoke
with the cohen playing in the background

andi has short red hair
that gets in my mouth
when i kss her behind her ear

she has dimples and green eyes
that shine in the dark
as she tells me about her ex-boyfriends
and her father in missouri
and how she wound up in corpus
living with her mother
and her sister who she hates
and her daughter

andi is honest in a way that offends some people
she speaks her mind
without a filter to spare feelings
or soften the blow

i tell her my story
she already knows most of it

and we just hold each other
we share secrets
we share pain

but we share something else
something that only two people
who have been through the ringer can share
its something a lot like dignity

knowing that loneliness and bitterness
is not what put us in this bed
-it takes a long time but god dies too/but not before he sticks it to you-

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At the end of Lonely Street, where I come from...

Postby A rope leash » Sat Dec 20, 2003 10:53 pm

Ever notice how things go suddenly very quiet on Tin Pan Alley after CPunk posts a poem?

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Postby LessThanZero » Sat Dec 20, 2003 11:57 pm

wait a minute....


nah, can't be.

ARL is right. Cp is awesome at expressing these things.
Loving this board since before When I Was Cruel.

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Postby so lacklustre » Sun Dec 21, 2003 4:16 am

cp is my favourite board poet probably because his stuff is so open and does not need a lot of interpretation and therefore does not require me to think too hard an so prevent my brain from hurting.
signed with love and vicious kisses

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